Analysing IELTS Band 9 Essay -1

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Lots of IELTS students suffer to understand their mistakes in IELTS task 2. We will be coming up with sample essays of Band 9 and will go behind the writer's intention of making it band 9. So we have got this Band 9 IELTS sample essay from dcielts website which is considered amongst the best IELTS website for preparation. Different vocabulary and synonyms will be highlighted as to increase the content of the reader so that he/ she can think of substantial words when attempting the IELTS exam.

Below are the factors that the inspector keeps in mind while accessing Task 2 for IELTS -

  1. Task Achievement  - Stick to the question
  2. Coherence and cohesion - Linking sentences
  3. Lexical Resource -  appropriate usage of vocabulary
  4. Grammatical Range and accuracy - Grammer mistakes


IELTS Band 9 Essay Task 2 Analysis -


Source - dcielts.info

Analyzing Introduction paragraph -

You need strong words to start with your essay writing to keep the attention of the reader. It is suggested, to begin with, "In recent times," followed by the paraphrased question.  Subjects are divided into 2 classification - Modern subjects and Traditional subjects. Different synonyms to categorize the items. "Pupils" here is referred to as a synonym of students. 

Lexical Resources covered - 
Subjects - Modern and traditional
Schools - Primary and secondary
Students - Pupils, schoolchildren, young people's, children

Analyzing the First Paragraph -

The First paragraph again starts with a bold statement including "major argument" as an adjective to seize the attention of the reader, which is still followed by the paraphrased question as attempted in the introduction paragraph. 

Coherence and Cohesion -
- This is that
- From this point of view
- For example

Lexical resources used -
IT ~ computer literate

Analyzing the second paragraph -

The second paragraph again started with a bold statement stating "strong arguments."

Analyzing Conclusive paragraph -

Precisely concluded the section.

The Structure and vocabulary of the IELTS essay matter a lot. Let me give you a pro tip to crack task 2. Below is the sample essay structure, which itself consists of 125 characters, you just have to fill in the blanks.

Sample Band 9 IELTS essay structure -






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